Bryant Museum Commercial...

[holaw002]

Hey guys, I had to do a commercial for class, and I did one for the Bryant Museum. Oddly enough, the Bryant Museum wants to see what I come up with 'cause they might want to use it... So let me know what ya'll think, I know it still needs to be tweaked a little (but you'll get the idea)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=Ux08Rb0X6UE

 

[alextupelo]

good shots, id lose the first part, and maybe a different song, if you happen to have the Alabama's greatest moments cd you could use some of the game clips from that, go with the season never ends angle maybe, just an idea.

 

[Vinny]

Not bad

 

[lafella]

It's definitely an in your face commercial. That song has just been so over used.

How about We are the Champions! Course thats a bit over used also lol.

 

[MISSIN'BAMA]

Very good...

I love the song Crimson Tide and Deep Blue Sea by Nightwish. Maybe an idea for your next commercial. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AHmFP13jdcM

 

[holaw002]

Thanks guys, I appreciate the comments. Yeah, the music was something I really had a problem with. I just thought Carmina by Orff was the best out of the list I could think of. Thanks and let me know if you have any ideas for a video, and I'll work on it...I'm always up for a video project. Peace

 

[TIDE-HSV]

In selecting "Carmina Burana," I take it you didn't pay a lot of attention to the lyrics?

 

[Jack Bourbon]

I saw Carmina Burana once. I nodded off. I couldn't believe it. They need to get some air in those damned buildings! Hot, humid, stuffy. . . it's like they're trying to sedate everyone!!11

 

[Bama-94-00]

I liked the video and camera work. I'd prefer some narration in there, less music.

I could see the Museum using a lot of your footage.

 

[holaw002]

In selecting "Carmina Burana," I take it you didn't pay a lot of attention to the lyrics?

Yeah, I know...isn't it about monk's molesting women or something like that? But I don't think most people know that...they just know the song haha.

 

[80UoAGrad]

I think of Sean Hannity when I hear Carmina....the commercial is good....I like all of the fast shots....maybe some different music would be okay. You are on the right track!!!!!

 

[derek4tide]

Communications major viewpoints:

As some have suggested, change the music. Also, good ediitng, but too many fast cuts. Take your time and tell the story, use more shots of the NC stuff as well. Looks like a "B-" but you have the talent to do an "A." :BigA: