He will likely be able to improve. I know he wants to. It's probably one of his problems - he wants to please, so he's wordy. I have not heard him; really didn't want to because I was concerned he might not be good. What is his problem(s). Is he too wordy, too opinionated, afraid to voice an opinion, not able to be concise, etc.?
monotone voice, says a lot of cliche remarks, a lot of captain obvious comments. if you heard him you would think he never played the game.